Aw, thank you so much!! *beams* :)

Great that you think so, I'm glad. Funny enough, I started with a Kara POV, I always thought this was easier but he turned out to be more fun. I am psyched you liked it! And I didn't plan for it to be that creepy, it just went there. *innocent look*

The trapping of feet = a foreshadowing of the white!paint scene?
Heh! Now that you mention it. *gasp* I stole it. :D